I have decided to write my argumentative paper on “What
we should do about the Ebola outbreak”. I know you all are probably like ugh
more about Ebola but a lot of people don’t really know a lot about it, you
think you know a lot about it however people are freaking out for no reason. I’m
not saying it’s not a problem, it is a very serious problem that needs to be
dealt with, but I’m going to try to make you understand that you really don’t need
to freak out about it.
Ebola is a very serious problem,
however people don’t really understand that we should be worried but we do not
need to be in a panic….. Yet, there may come a time when we do need to panic
but that is not now. Currently in the U.S and Europe only three people have
actually died from Ebola. Only 19 cases of Ebola have been treated Europe and
the United States. If you do get Ebola you are not contagious until you start
showing symptoms, if you do start showing symptoms though the virus is then
present on your skin. These symptoms will usually begin about eight to 10 days
after the exposure to the virus, you will think you have a flu: a headache, fever
and aches and pains. Then your health will take a turn for the worst you will
start hemorrhaging. You may start throwing up blood, have blood in your urine, and
bleed under your skin or from your eyes and mouth. Then your blood vessels deep
in your body begin leaking fluid, causing blood pressure to plummet so low that
the heart, kidneys, liver and other organs begin to fail.
I think that if we need calm. We
have no reason to panic yet about this in the U.S. I believe that if the
problem does become worse than we should panic. I have been asked if I have
Ebola just from simply coughing at a gas station, I was asked by a police
officer. I think that the panic is getting more out of hand then the actual
virus in America right now. If you are cautious then you have nothing to worry
about. If the problem does happen to get worse then I think we should stop
letting flights in from Africa.
I really enjoy your topic because it's so "to date". It's obvious what point you're trying to get at, just keep making sure that you don't fall off into any rant that isn't necessary.
ReplyDeleteI feel like you are trying to prove two points, what we should do about ebola, and why we shouldn't be freaking out about it right now. Like jordyn said if you are mainly focusing on what we should do about it be careful you don't direct your focus to why we shouldn't be freaking out. Also, I really liked the fact that an officer asked you if you had ebola, not sure if you should put that in the paper or not but it was funny!
ReplyDeleteThis topic is a good choice since it is going on around us right now, make sure you talk about the views people have on it, what the symptoms are, and that it is not as big of a deal as everyone is making it out to seem even though it at the same time is a big deal.
ReplyDeleteI believe that this topic is a good choice in my opinion because I'm on the same boat you are. Ebola is a very sensitive topic and a lot of people don't actually know how it got into the country let alone its progression throughout people. +1 for picking Ebola
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